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Fec02038



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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Tue Jan 30, 2007 7:50 pm

Dog is man's best fren mah... he so sohai, dun chat wif him later he always bark at me lolx
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Wed Jan 31, 2007 10:04 pm

Aiyoz...

It is not i seldom on9

It is juz u all on9 too frequently

I wonder where do the time for u all on9 come from? scratch
Sigh... Crying or Very sad
I only have 24hour
So i must use it wisely
mainly Sleep

I envy u all to have so many timezzz

Anyway i will try to on9 frequently
as u all miss me so much
heeee
lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Wed Jan 31, 2007 10:07 pm

yaloh... but my will be disappearing 1 week from now... this week's my holiday... btw, i hav some announcement from bi lian hui...

we will be decorating our school this sunday(4-2-07), so plz lend a hand if u hav time...
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:26 pm

. 高三畢業了,投入社會才那幾年光景,已對這機械般的生活感到厭倦了.日出而作,日落方歸,這種枯燥乏味的生活,不禁讓我懷念起中學的那段生涯,自由自在,無憂無慮當年的好友,現已各奔東西了,但往年與你們一起度過的時光,卻還是我最珍惜的回憶.某日收到的一封信,為我平淡的生活添上了色彩,增添了期待.伴我走過中學生涯的你,要從澳洲回馬了.
. 不知不覺,你去澳洲深造已是五年前的事了.年光似箭,五年光景,剎那間的流逝了,不留下半點痕跡,也不帶走半絲情誼.當年常一起看戲,一起補習,一起慶生,這些回憶至今雖然模糊了,但感覺依然存在.每當回想起這些種種,暖意便油然而生,暖透了我的心房
. 那天,我起的十分早,強忍著呵欠,整理了儀容,很久已沒試過那麼的期待一樣事了.這種感覺,以前也試過的,在和你們去旅行的前一晚,因為你們那天的朝霞笑得十分燦爛,我回到了當年我們班聚閑聊的老地方-陽光海岸.自從畢業後,很久已沒回來這裡啦 !這裡有我們許多甜美的回憶,再瀪重的功課與考試壓力都在彼此的笑聲中走過去了.這裡的場景沒什麼改變,只是陳舊了些,滄桑了些.希望我們可以再為這裡注入一些活力,一些笑聲.可以的
. 等待的時光總是最熬人的,心情有些期待,有些緊張,有些不安店裡雖然不是高朋滿座,但總讓我覺得人流量十分的高,人來人往的.我靜靜地注視著門口,多希望下一个開門進來的是人是你呀! 最後,你出現了.雖然眼睛教我無法相信眼前的這一幕,但感覺卻告訴我,眼前這位高大英偉的青年就是我多年不見的故友,平靜的心湖因你的歸來而再次波動了.打了招呼後,我們都坐了下來.從前好動活躍的你只是靜靜的低頭凝視著桌上的那張飲料表,不發一言.最後,我開口打破了僵局,問了一些諸如近況如何之類的客套話.但你答我的卻是一句又一句流暢的英語,說得十分棒,可惜我卻不太聽得懂.你略帶尴軋的看著我,我也只能報以淺淺的苦笑不同的國家,不同的環境,不同的生活,說實在的,有誰能不向生活低頭,不為生活改變呢?雖然語言上出現了些代溝,但你我還是努力的找出了許多話題,可是到最後,還是落得各說各的下場.畢竟,腦海里連一个關于你我的共同話題也找不到這幾年來, 各自活在不同的圈子里,有著不同的辛酸,不同的風雨,但伴隨你我走過的都不再是彼此了.大家靜靜的坐著,空氣中迷漫著一股冰冷的絕望,我的心,卻出奇的平靜.這時,店裡的阿姨端來了一杯咖啡,放在你的桌前.不知為何,心中竟多了一種莫名的失落感此時我才真正的看清楚你,真的改變了許多,比我想像中的多.渴望見面了這麼久, 頓時才發現,我們之間已隔了這麼多年.你過去的笑容,也只能在回憶里細味了突然,一支鈴聲把我從回憶里惊醒了.你拿起手機便侃侃而談,一句句流暢的英語挾雜著你的笑聲,又泛起了我心中的另一陣漣漪.再次聽到你的笑聲,看見你的笑容,我真的十分高興,但開心的背後卻挾帶著半絲的哀愁
. 你匆匆的來,匆匆的去,只留下我和那兩杯飲料 一杯珍珠奶茶與一杯咖啡.當年來到這裡,珍珠奶茶便是我們唯一的選擇,但今天,珍珠奶茶卻已被一杯熱騰騰的咖啡取代了.我靜靜的看了這裡一遍,最後的一遍,桃花依舊.雖然回到了我們相識的地方,但卻永遠回不了我們相識的那一天
. 然而後悔今天到來了,感覺就像失去了什麼似的.難怪人人都說回憶總是最美好的.五年的光景,其實早已衝談了情誼,留下的,只是無限的唏噓而已
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Fri Feb 02, 2007 11:33 pm

share wth u all dude...
still got a bit kek shui lar...
dun noe y put on here more kek shui...
maybe the background calour...= ="
still havent got title yet de o....
give some opinion ba ^^"
kek shui T_T
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:19 pm

give some face leh..
all die liao ar XD (??)
一定要完成計劃!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:22 pm

..............errr...........good ....goood good ........nice.

(Kek shui ) read it again........very kek shui...........too...ermmm... don't know how to explain....

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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:27 pm

close your music ....then read this slowly maybe will better....
but really lar got some kek shui...
this is 90% lar i think..
i still want put somemore inside...
maybe i noe kek at where....
i try ba ..T_T
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:29 pm

Why the music? Without the music i sure close this topic ler.

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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:54 pm

Not bad,Nearn

good essay

I think can win some prize at least
But neeed a little polish still

the title a?
why don't call it
re-meet,zhong fong or something like that
or you,ni
make it short and kinda blurr
more yeng i think



actually the essay kinda sad

i wish when we meet again somedays later
we are not like that
we are still the same old sohai gang

no matter how we may change
our firendship shall not fade
as time is irrelevant toward the great friendshp of ours

i hope... Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Tue Feb 06, 2007 1:55 pm

so many words... very lazy la!!!
haizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Tue Feb 06, 2007 5:43 pm

ZZZzzzz....
later i will + 200~300 words inside 1 woh~
want read read now lolx....
if not .... hehe XD

fish:
close music better lar~感覺...
thadd gone liao lolx...

last year the sohai SPM...
every day oso tution...
lipwei,thadd,wong,thinke,RAO(?!)....
miss the time that we spend 2gether....(感動mao??wakakak...= =")
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Tue Feb 06, 2007 8:09 pm

Thadd still not strong enough........you can see it visually before he gone to Australia. Now he's not feeling well there, he just sms me = =. But can't online frequently now........need wait for his laptop XD.

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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Tue Feb 06, 2007 10:38 pm

Aiya

Now wif the help of technology
we can reach each other in no time
and wat else next time we would have3G
no need to be so sad lah

though i miss his sohai noise too
but he said he will be back in april
so very fast de sunny

anyway i kinda miss Rao too
dono how is he
still sin kar lan perhaps...
heeheee... Very Happy
lol! lol! lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:05 pm

Some comment for Nearn:

Nice one...but not lively enough...just add in some 1st person actions and some situations, then very nice liao...press on the theme...gambateh dude!
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Wed Feb 07, 2007 10:08 pm

無從入手...
怎樣改都不好...
kek 手 T_T
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:05 pm

!!! dunno y i aslept when im reading ur articles
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:13 pm

nearn, im a bit late.....but can i flame ur essay(short stories)?
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Thu Feb 08, 2007 10:21 pm

flame???
burn ar??? XD
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Fri Feb 09, 2007 7:45 pm

haha...then u must jian tao liao...nvm...a good start and better than nothing...get on trying...
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PostSubject: Re: Very Important !!!!   Fri Feb 09, 2007 8:32 pm

i want de is you all de opinion leh.............
opinion !!!!!
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